Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Narrative Essay


The Truth Hurts
Chapter 1
Cheyenne woke this morning on the top of the world. Her best friend Patricia was on her to their school to finally move into her dorm at USC. Cheyenne had already moved out to Los Angeles two weeks ago. She couldn’t imagine herself living in those dirty, old, tiny little dorms; plus where would all her clothes and shoes and jewelry go. Yea, dorm life wasn’t for a girl like Cheyenne, so he parents set up her in a nice one bedroom apartment, not too far from their school. Patricia had just texted Cheyenne and told she was waiting in line to get the key to her room, and to start getting ready so she could help her set up her room. With that, Cheyenne hopped in the shower and threw on one of her Victoria Secret PINK sweat suits, slid her feet in her favorite pair of UGG boots, tousled her flawless long hair and was out the door. Patricia had already texted the room information so Cheyenne parked her car and ran up the stairs. She rang the doorbell and as it swung open Patricia attacked her with a huge hug. “Finally you’re here Chy! I’ve missed you so much,” said Patricia. “I know! These last few weeks have been like hell. I’ve been stuck in the house, alone with nothing to do and nobody to hang with,” responded Cheyenne. “Well, all that is about to change, because now we’re together and ready for whatever. Me and you are about to turn Los Angeles up,” Patricia said with a playful look on her face as the two girls walked back in the dorm room. When Cheyenne entered the dorm she was totally wrong about dorm life. They had a living room, kitchen, single rooms, and their own bathroom inside the dorm. Cheyenne said to Patricia, “I thought the dorm rooms were just small rooms with two beds and a bathroom to share with the whole floor.” “Maybe ten years ago, this here is the 2012 edition of living of on campus,” Patricia said. Cheyenne was so high maintenance, she never considered living on campus from the beginning; therefore when applying to school, she never did any research on the dorms. But now, as she was walking around Patricia's apartment styled dorm, and meeting her two roommates, she was little jealous inside. Of course having your own apartment is great, no rules, no curfew, and you can do absolutely anything you wanted. But everyone wants the whole college experience. Living in the dorms you had roommates to talk to, and there were so many people who lived in the dorms making it easier to meet people and make friends. Cheyenne thought about making a call to her father to see if could arrange some things and get in the dorms. She quickly changed her mind. Since her best friend lived there, that was practically her second home, and gave her an excuse to be hanging around the dorms since she didn’t live there. If Patricia met new friends, Cheyenne would soon meet them, and they would fall in love with her just as everyone else did. Cheyenne saw their social life playing like a movie right there before her eyes. Her and Patricia would hang out around the dorms, meet cute guys and chill girls. Then once they knew enough people, the could parties all the time at Cheyenne apartment since there weren’t any RAs regulating how many people are in your dorm or any quiet hour rules that would make them have to stop the fun. Oh yes, college was going to be great Cheyenne thought, USC was definitely in for trouble with the two of them together she said to herself.
Chapter 2
Patricia had been having the time of her life these past few months in college. She loved the rules of college and having the power over her education. She was able to pick her own classes at whatever time of the day she liked, eliminating having to wake up early in the morning like in high school. Her favorite part was that she took classes she found interesting and not because it was a part of any requirements. Even though Patricia always did well academically, learning about subjects she enjoyed made her perform even better. And let’s not forget about the last pro of being in college; she had the choice to attend class or not with the only consequence being she missed out on that day’s lesson. Life was looking all too well for Patricia and Cheyenne. They were in college and doing well in their classes, making friends, partying and having fun, and Patricia had even met a guy and really enjoyed his company. Patricia’s friend Lauren from class was planning to make a trip up to Big Bear with a few other people Patricia knew from around campus. Once the professor was done lecturing and assigned group work Lauren popped the question to Patricia, “Me and a few people going to up Big Bear Thursday night. My dad paid for a cabin and got us rental, you wanna come?” Patricia wasn’t an outdoors type of girl but it sounded kind of fun, so she agreed. Then she remembered if she left Cheyenne in LA alone, Cheyenne would throw the hugest fit. As outgoing as Cheyenne was, she couldn’t do anything without someone by her side or following behind her. “Would it be okay if my best friend Chy came too, you remember her right?” Patricia said to Lauren. Lauren gave Patricia a long blank stare. Patricia knew Lauren and Cheyenne had met, and remembered how horrible they had hit off. Cheyenne was very over protected of any female associates getting too close to Patricia, she wanted to be Patricia’s only bestfriend. So when Cheyenne met Lauren at the Sigma party and noticed how close they were becoming, she did everything in her power to keep Patricia glued to her hip, while constantly pushing Lauren out of the picture all night long. Cheyenne blamed it on her being drunk, but Patricia knew her bestfriend all too well. Finally Lauren responded, “Ummmmmmm…… I don’t know I have to check, everyone who’s driving, car is filled I believe. I have to check though.” “Oh that’s fine, then me and Cheyenne will just ride up together in one of our cars. So everything is perfect! Text me all the info right now and we’ll all meet up tomorrow night,” Patricia said as she grabbed her books and left the class. She knew Lauren didn’t want her to bring Cheyenne. None of her new friends really liked Cheyenne, but they just didn’t know her yet and she thought this trip would let everyone see how fun and cool of a person she really was. Now she just had to convince Cheyenne to come along. Patricia wasn’t an outdoors type of girl, but Cheyenne definitely wasn’t going to be into this trip.
Chapter 3
When Patricia asked Cheyenne did she want to go on a road trip with some of their friends, she was more than excited to go. Once Patricia told Cheyenne it was at Big Bear, all her excitement went out the door. “You mean Big Bear as in MOUNTAINS? As in outdoors? In the WILDERNESS? Nah, I’ll pass,” Cheyenne said to Patricia. “And since when did you become an outdoors kind of person? You don’t even like going to the beach being in the sand! Now you want to go to the mountains? You’re crazy Trish.” Patricia knew it was going to be hard convincing Cheyenne to make this trip, but she had a backup plan. “And we have to drive and pay for our own gas too! This is a horrible is idea Trish, I don’t want to go,” Cheyenne continued. Cheyenne knew she had won this one, and she knew Patricia wouldn’t dare go without her. “We have to go,” Patricia finally argued back. “Some of the basketball players are going and from what I heard, Travis is going to be there”. Cheyenne’s whole attitude changed. “Well…..… you since you put it that way….…now we don’t have a choice but to go,” Cheyenne said. Travis Bailey was a sophomore who played basketball at USC, and Cheyenne was madly in love with him, and with a few more appearances from her, he would be in love with Cheyenne too. Cheyenne ran and packed her bags packing just about every piece of clothing she owned. She spent the night at Patricia’s dorm so after class, they could leave with everyone else from the dorms. The two and a half hour drive seemed like ten hours, but they finally made it. Lauren’s father had got her and her friends one of the resort cabins. Cheyenne was very satisfied to see that it was civilization around them. When Patricia told her they were staying in a cabin, Cheyenne imagined a small little dirty log cabin in the middle of nowhere. But this cabin was like a regular house similar to hotel resort, but in the form of a cabin. There were three rooms with six beds and two pull out couches, but it was at least close to twenty people all on the trip. All Cheyenne knew was that she wasn’t sleeping on the floor and didn’t want to share the bed anyone else unless it was Patricia… or Travis. Cheyenne didn’t know this group of people too well, she was always around them, but she never really talked to any of them. She knew most of the girls, actually all of the girls didn’t like her, but all the guys did, and that’s all that mattered to Cheyenne. Everyone had got settled in and comfortable. The sleeping arrangements were made, Lauren’s older sister Jackie was in the kitchen cooking spaghetti and garlic bread for everybody, and the boys had just got back from the store with the alcohol for the night. Everyone was having a good time being silly, dancing, and just having a good time. Cheyenne was sitting with Travis and some of the other boys while they played Madden on the PlayStation. She was talking with Travis and she could tell her magic was working on him. She was enjoying their conversation until Travis went to the bathroom and never came back. Cheyenne went to go find him and he was in the kitchen joking around with Tony and some of the girls. Cheyenne went to go stand by him and he didn’t give her any attention. Travis liked Cheyenne a lot, but he had a rep to protect and he couldn’t be tied down to any girl.
Chapter 4
When Cheyenne came into the kitchen, Patricia could tell Cheyenne was about have one of her dramatic episodes. Travis wasn’t paying Cheyenne too much of his attention and Cheyenne wasn’t use to that at all. Patricia was getting really tired of Cheyenne embarrassing her in front of everyone. Cheyenne had always acted like a spoiled brat when she didn’t get her. It never bothered Patricia before because in high school everyone knew how Cheyenne was, and just accepted it. But they weren’t in high school anymore, and these fits Cheyenne through had to end, Patricia thought while she sat and watched Cheyenne annoy everyone in the room by begging for their attention. Patricia was so disgusted with her best friend's behavior as she bragged about her material possessions and how great her life was back home, cut people off in the middle of their sentences, and continued to revert the group conversation back to herself no matter the subject. People had started leaving the kitchen because they were tired of sitting through the Cheyenne show. Patricia had never been this embarrassed. She felt like all of her friends were mad at her for bringing Cheyenne. Patricia walked to the bathroom and overheard Lauren talking to her sister Jackie. “Trish is a really cool girl Jackie, but I can’t keep inviting her places if she keeps tagging Cheyenne along. She always kills the mood, walking in being superficial and uppity. That may pass in Westford, but in LA, nobody has time for that.” Once they got back to campus Patricia wanted to be as far away from Cheyenne as she could. She went to take Cheyenne to her apartment so she could continue on back to her dorm and be around normal people. Cheyenne had complained the whole two hours of their drive home. She complained about how Travis made her mad, and how annoying all the girls were. Patricia’s annoyance was building up and she did her best to hold everything in. She listened silently as Cheyenne went on and on. She didn’t understand how Cheyenne wasn’t catching that she was upset about something. All their life Patricia never understood how people couldn’t like Cheyenne. The girls in their city were very catty and fake towards each other, so Patricia always blamed it on that. Patricia felt so blind, that it took moving away to a new city and meeting new people to show her Cheyenne’s true colors. Patricia told Cheyenne she was super tired and had a lot of homework and she needed to be alone to focus so she could finish fast and go to sleep. Patricia dropped her off and called Lauren and asked her to meet at Starbucks and have a talk.
Chapter 5
Patricia had been holding back so much anger towards Cheyenne she had to get it off her chest which is why she went and talked with Lauren. Lauren was so relieved to hear that Patricia wasn’t blind to Cheyenne’s ridiculous actions. Lauren was on the verge of letting Patricia go as a friend if she continued to make everyone put up with Cheyenne. Lauren felt really bad for Patricia as she laid out their whole friendship. Al the competing against each other, Patricia turning down great opportunities so Cheyenne wouldn’t feel out shined. Lauren sat and listened and let Patricia get everything off her chest. Patricia was grateful for Lauren’s listening ears, and what made her love Lauren as a very genuine person even more was that she never once judged Cheyenne, which she couldn’t believe because she knew how much Lauren hated her. By the end of their therapy session Lauren had convinced Patricia to tell Cheyenne how she really felt. “If Cheyenne is really your friend, she’ll take the criticism. Of course at first she’s going to be very defensive, but if she values your guy’s friendship, she'll think about what you say to her and try to fix herself,” Lauren preached to Patricia. Patricia went over to Cheyenne apartments and told her how she felt. She gave Cheyenne the truth, the whole truth, and didn’t leave anything out. Surprisingly Cheyenne sat through the whole intervention without saying too much of anything. Patricia didn’t know if it was a good thing or a bad thing that Cheyenne let her get absolutely everything off her chest. When Patricia was done she told Cheyenne she thinks they need to spend a few days apart. And Patricia agreed. Then Patricia asked Cheyenne if she had anything to say about the way Patricia acts, and Cheyenne just sat there, and tears began to fall from her eyes. Highly annoyed, Patricia responded, “Typical Cheyenne Kennedy stunt. You would try and play the victim in this situation.” Patricia was so fed up with Cheyenne; she grabbed her things and slammed the door on her way out. Patricia was done allowing Cheyenne told hold her back from having the best college experience. Their friendship was over in Patricia eyes.
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Cheyenne couldn’t believe Patricia was blaming her for her fake friends being so phony to her. She liked it that way. They didn’t need any more female friends, they had each other, and that’s all that should matter. Cheyenne was devastated that her best friend broke their most sacred promise to each other. When the two girls promoted to middle they vowed to not let anyone come between their friendship, in high school they swore to not let anything influence or change them, and in when they were getting ready to come to college they promised to continue to fight through everything together. Patricia broke that oath between them and Cheyenne was furious. Cheyenne thought to herself, “If she wants to let the people break up our friendship, then so be it. It must have not been that strong or real if Patricia could just give up that easy.” Cheyenne decide she didn’t need Patricia in her life anymore. “She always brought me down anyway, and I’m way over her being jealous of everything about me. Patricia’s little competitions were getting annoying anyway.” Cheyenne tried to convince herself that she didn’t need friends, just followers to make her look good and do as she said. She planned out the rest of her life, Patricia free, and she was content with the way things played. The next morning Cheyenne woke up and began to get ready to go to campus and find her a couple of not so worthy soles to be her minions. Cheyenne walked over to the mirror to put on her makeup, and as she stared at herself examining her flawless features, she broke down and cried. No matter how she played out the situation, she knew she had messed up for good. Patricia was her only true friend their whole life. When the kids at school never played with Cheyenne, the girls never invited her to the sleepovers, and the way girls always whispered about her when she came around, Patricia never let any of that determine the way she saw Cheyenne. Patricia was the only person who knew and understood the real Cheyenne and why she acted the way she did. Cheyenne cried for the whole day reminiscing on all the bad she had done and the way she treated her so called friend. Cheyenne always envied Patricia. They were both beautiful and always had the same of everything, but somehow Patricia always found a way to win people over with her personality, something that Cheyenne lacked. Cheyenne finally admitted to herself, that she was one who held Patricia back and she was the one who kept the competition between them going. Cheyenne had ruined the best thing was going in her life, but her pride would never let her rekindle the friendship.